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SOS- Page 1

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Allright, this is the first of eight pages to my one shot: "SOS - Save our Sun" I did back in 2009 for a competition I entered. The theme was the "sun" and had to be mentioned at least once in the text. Being an otaku, I chose the legend of Amateratsu. Unfortunately, I didn't make the rankings. The reason why I didn't post this in the first place was due to the fact that I was too lazy and or too busy to put this up. But since this is the Easter Break, I managed to force myself to posting this during my extended study breaks. I added the copyright this year, because once again, I am a procrastinator and I didn't do that last year.
The judges told me that even though I had potential in my story writing, my panelling was too cramped and that is why I didn't make the rankings. Though they admitted that drawing this comic in a max of eight page WAS pretty difficult. Maybe this year will be a better one.

Next: [link]

To find out about the legend: - [link]
To find out about the competition: - [link]

Allright, till next time readers.
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JammyScribbler's avatar
Wow, your entry last year was miles better than mine. o.o

Can I ask how you got feedback from the judges? I'd like to know what they think of my efforts and how I can get better.